2006-03-08

linaewen: (Lords of Gondor by captinskywalker)
2006-03-08 09:01 am
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Proud and stern of glance

 Here's a bit of a long musing I wrote early on in the days when FOTR was still in the theaters.  I was thinking today about how good men can sometimes fail and fall, yet in repentance find peace with their failing.  Of course, Boromir came to mind, then, and I remembered this musing.  The poem that follows was written separately, but goes along with it well.  Sorry, it's long -- hope you won't be dismayed but will find time to read it, especially if you missed it when it was first posted.

Hope Misplaced

I set my hope on the White City, 
But she was besieged and came close to falling;

I placed my trust in my heritage, 
But my blood ran red as any common man's;

I set my hope on my ability to lead men, 
But I broke my oath and attacked my friend;  

I placed my trust in my sword and shield, 
But my sword did not bring victory, for my enemy outnumbered me.

I set my hope on my right to rule, 
But I fell to temptation, while another resisted;

I placed my trust in battles and sorties, 
I should have listened, and let others lead;

I set my hope on myself, on my honor, 
My honor was broken, and my strength revealed as weakness.

I sought answers to a riddle;
I found the answer, but did not understand.

I sought aid for the battle; 
I found one who would take my place. 

I sought to please my father; 
I should have obeyed my King.  

I sought friendship; 
I found it, and lost it, 
And found it again, ere the end.  

I sought forgiveness; 
I received it, though not from the injured one. 
But it was enough. 

--- Linaewen, 2002